Question:
Is there a better way to word & line the following: Mr. & Mrs. James Moore (bride's father & stepmother)request the pleasure of your company at the marriage of Mrs. Susan King-Moore's (bride's mother, divorced Moore,re-married to Mr. Smith but did not change her hyphenated name)andMr. James Moore's daughterMary Ellen andMr. Robert Graham Jonesson of Dr. Jillian Jonesetc. etc. The requirements are:Stepparents hosting weddingRecognition of mother & father of brideRecognition of mother of groom (absolutely do not mention father)
Answer:
WOW! This is a doozy! LOL OK here we go--and this is the CORRECT way to word this:
Mr. & Mrs. James Moore
Mrs. Susan King-Moore
Dr. Jillian Jones
Request the honour of your presence at the marriage of their children:
Mary Ellen Moore
to
Mr. Robert Graham Jones
On Saturday the 1st of July Two Thousand and Nine (or 2009)at half past three
At Our Lady of Great Agony Church
123 Main Street
Anytown, ST. 00000
Reception Immediately following ceremony at:
Name of Venue
Address of Venue
The Favour of A Reply is requested by June 10, 2009